Comments
- It did put a mischevious grin on my in-need-of-a-shave face and made me read the other two parts again. Well done!
- "Catlina?" Come now, Gentle, it's really YOU writing, isn't it? Please change "that she wa dreaming" to "that she was dreaming."
- That waqs fucking retarded
- This is a real good poem. Kinda different, but it's still good, I have to give you that.
- Alice pt3 is strange. It shows Alice as a a hot woman looking for some kind of sex that is totally undefined. Part3 is obviously an intro to part 4; as by itself it tells the reader very little about Alice or what is to come.
- My my, sounds like an introspective to me! Enjoyed... different but interesting and good!
- Cute and colourful. Going to try more like it?
- Aside from the fact you had some misspellings, it was intrigueing.
- AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! :-D
- Cute poem. Now how about one that's more specific.
- YUK....................
- Clever use of the fable, can immagine, helps my ancient body feel, thanks.
- different but good
- What the story may lack in Looking Glass quality, it makes up for in surprise. I like it. Thanks. Please send more.
- This is a magnificent series. I thought it started a little slow ... that is, like a lot of other fuck stories ... but then I begin to see the storyline better and I love how Alice in Wonderland became a nymphomaniac. Ok, maybe that's the wrong term for her ... turns out she is just as horny as I am, but I loved all three segments, especially the last line of the poem. Now you GOTTA write at least one segment about "me" and Alice. I know you have to have some great ideas about how that will go and I'm looking forward to reading about it.

Alice Pt 3

Posted on 01 Feb 2005 by Gentle

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Alice fell throught the looking glass,

but where the fuck did she fall?

She looked around, And this new place,

wasn't home at all.

Walking through the first door,

she saw things, she never saw before.

It opened her eyes up wide,

and made something uncurl inside...

She walked through the second door, and thought

that she was dreaming,

walking through the corridor,

all the glass was steaming..

Alice ran through the third door,

looking for some sanity.

Didn't like the things she saw,

because of how they made her feel inside.

She tripped and fell,

finding the hole by accident,

she moaned, and the people egged her on,

the more she moved and stroked,

the more it didn't feel wrong..

Alice is really lost now,

looking for the next attraction.

Wanting so to come.

Alice is really lost in wonder-Land,

waiting for you to come,

won't you offer her two fingers?

and show her how it's done?

Alice walked through the last door,

looking for what she could see.

that was her last mistake,

because that's where she found...

Me.

Tell me how you feel